I have been working on my Digipak and magazine add as I thought I could improve on them. So I kept them pretty much the same however have made on change which made a big difference.

This is my first draft when the image as the back is one and is over the whole double page. I think this looks more clear as it the image is seen more clearly. making the image looks more noticeable.

This is my second version I think this one is Better however I may have not git the write text I need, the only way in which I can find this out is to get some audience feed back.

For my magazine advert I have the same background image however I am unsure about what should be on it there for I have to versions. The fist version is where I have used the front cover of the Digipak, with text.
This is my second version I think this one is Better however I may have not git the write text I need, the only way in which I can find this out is to get some audience feed back.